Paper Conference

After doing our peer reviews we turned our papers in so our teacher could look them over. Mr. Bevill and I had a conference about my paper on the following Thursday. Our talk was brief, but it helped me out tremendously. My paper was too short to begin with, and I could not find a way to make it any longer. Mr. Bevill gave me the idea of adding another ad to my paper and comparing the two. With that suggestion and a few corrections in structure I went back to my dorm and was able to successfully complete the paper so that it was a decent length and more interesting to read.